9/07/2007

POETRY-A friendship's poem

YOU'RE NEVER ALONE

You're never alone, I'm always near,
When your troubled, down or blue.
All you have to do is call me,
I'm always here for you.
It doesn't matter where I'm at,
It doesn't matter when.
When you need someone to talk to,
I'm here to be your friend.
If you need someone to hold your hand,
or a hug to say I care.
If you need a shoulder to cry on,
for you I will be there.
So never think you are a burden,
when the weight gets to be to much.
You might find if look hard enough,
a good friend could be the right touch.

You're never alone, I'm always here,
through the good times and the bad.
I'm always here to be your friend,
I don't like to see you sad.


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As we can appresiate this is a poem writen from a person to his friend.It talks about companionship and support between friends.

We can see this author uses the "four" ingridientsto make this poem, it has thought (it has a lot of intellectual content, the author transmits a lot of tings to the person who he is writing for),We can notice it have a lot of rhymes,this poem is very imaginary (for example when it says:I don't want to see you sad), it's too a poem that has a lot of music.

Apart from these there's a lot more ingridients like synecdoche for example in phrases like:If you need a shoulder to cry on, for you I will be there.(It means support not really a sholder itself.

I hope you like it as much as I do.Comment pleas!!

Sorce:http://www.friendship.com.au/poetry/best/best12b.html#one

2 comments:

Ceci Gal said...

I´m so sorry about having missed your blog all this time!!! Just thought the other one was yours, and it was so empty!
I'm just glad all you classmates will take a chance to read this blog. Great effort and very good result indeed.
By the way, you're right about the mark you got, I just didn't get the chance to see THIS;)

luli said...

pety: you choose the correct poem because it seems tou have written because you are a very good friend like the poem say you are always there when we need you!!!!!continue like this and you will continued making friends like you do now!!!!!! by KISSES very nice your blog!!